Studying out of hometown should be miss home frequently. But I think I am an exception. Except miss my mother’s cook. In the school, sometimes all my roommate was went home; I’m still stay in the dormitory. Let me think, since I went home last time was in the Moon Festival. It’s almost two months I never went home. I think it’s time to go home.
Open the computer, and booked a train ticket. Then I leave for the train station.
The distance From Taichung to my hometown was not very far. Why am I didn’t went home usually? It’s all faults for lazy. Soon, I got my hometown. But I suddenly miss the weather of Taichung. Because I’m cold to death right now! As soon as I got home, it’s time to dinner. I can’t mesmeric my mother’s special. Even more I’m go on a diet, I ate a lot.
It’s gave me a warm felt when I got home. Maybe sometimes went home was better than live in home. Less dissension, more concern and talk. When I think about these, I slowly fell asleep. To a man who is always sleeping very late, it’s a miracle.I was expect the next day trip with my father, to go to fishing.
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Hello, Mark. I found my feeling is opposite of yours. I miss my home so much and long to go home every weekend, but I can't do so, because of the school activities and the expensive train ticket.
But I found some mistakes in this article. You wrote "Studying out of hometown should be miss home frequently." I think it should be write "The students who Study out should miss home frequently." Your sentence is Taiwanese English. The grammar is totally wrong. The sentence you wrote didn't have the subject and need not to use the passive voice.
This is the tip which may help you understand how to write a complete sentence.
http://www.cybertranslator.idv.tw/grammar/fragments.htm
Let continue the last message I leaved. I found you wrote "sometimes all my roommate was went home; I’m still stay in the dormitory." I think there are some errors in it. It should be written "sometimes all my roommates went home; I was still stay in the dormitory." The word "roommate" is a countable noun, so you should use the plural number. Another error is that you shouldn't put two verbs, "was" and "went", together.
I offer you some tips to make you understand these two kinds of grammar.
http://www.cybertranslator.idv.tw/grammar/plural.htm
Hi, Mark. I found there are two strange sentences in this article.
They are "Let me think, since I went home last time was in the Moon Festival." and "It's almost two months I never went home." I think the grammar of the former is wrong and these two sentences can be combined. It should be written "Let me think, since I went home at the Moon Festival, it has been almost two months."
here are some tips to help you how to write a concise sentence.
http://www.cybertranslator.idv.tw/grammar/concise.htm
And here are the other tips to help you understand the present perfect.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/601/01/
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